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Jakub Morse's avatar

The dandelion tuft image at the end lands perfectly - words with no wish behind them, just scattering in the wind. That line about the head nodding yes while no echoes on empty walls captures the particular loneliness of being lied to gently. Sharp, economical piece.

Daisy Bix's avatar

Please identify the artist who creates the wonderful images published with this lovely poem and all the other published poems. I guess that Iwill have to submit poetry in the hope that it will be chosen and he/she will illustrate it.

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